怎么评价这份简历

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 楼主| mick_liang 发表于 2008-9-5 23:39 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
AN, TE, TI, ce, des
Liang&nbsp;Zhenheng<br />Tel:&nbsp;13832317309<br />Email:liangzhenheng@gmail.com<br />Add:&nbsp;No.279&nbsp;Huaian&nbsp;Road,&nbsp;Qiaoxi&nbsp;District,&nbsp;Shijiazhuang,&nbsp;Hebei<br /><br />Objective<br />To&nbsp;obtain&nbsp;a&nbsp;challenging&nbsp;position&nbsp;as&nbsp;a&nbsp;hardware&nbsp;engineer&nbsp;with&nbsp;an&nbsp;emphasis&nbsp;in&nbsp;MCU&nbsp;design&nbsp;an&nbsp;development.<br /><br />Education<br />2003.9-2007.6&nbsp;&nbsp;Dept.&nbsp;of&nbsp;Information&nbsp;Science&nbsp;an&nbsp;Engineering,&nbsp;Hebei&nbsp;University&nbsp;Science&nbsp;and&nbsp;Technology,&nbsp;B.E.<br /><br />Working&nbsp;Experience<br />2007.4-Now&nbsp;&nbsp;Designer,&nbsp;Shineway&nbsp;Technology&nbsp;Ltd.<br />&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;My&nbsp;duties&nbsp;are&nbsp;designing,&nbsp;drawing&nbsp;PCB&nbsp;and&nbsp;coding&nbsp;testing&nbsp;programmes&nbsp;with&nbsp;C.&nbsp;Designed&nbsp;several&nbsp;products,&nbsp;Such&nbsp;as&nbsp;character&nbsp;display&nbsp;module&nbsp;and&nbsp;graphics&nbsp;display&nbsp;module&nbsp;with&nbsp;or&nbsp;without&nbsp;Hanzi&nbsp;library.&nbsp;Expand&nbsp;the&nbsp;range&nbsp;of&nbsp;the&nbsp;company’s&nbsp;business.<br /><br />&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Computer&nbsp;Abilities&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<br />&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Skilled&nbsp;in&nbsp;the&nbsp;use&nbsp;of&nbsp;Protel&nbsp;99Se,&nbsp;AUTO&nbsp;CAD&nbsp;2004,&nbsp;Keil&nbsp;uV2.<br />&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;English&nbsp;Skills&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<br />&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Have&nbsp;acquired&nbsp;CET-4,&nbsp;CET-6.&nbsp;Spoken&nbsp;English&nbsp;is&nbsp;no&nbsp;very&nbsp;good.&nbsp;Now,&nbsp;I’am&nbsp;learning.<br /><br />&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Other&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<br />&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;I’am&nbsp;a&nbsp;good&nbsp;learner&nbsp;and&nbsp;can&nbsp;sit&nbsp;quietly&nbsp;to&nbsp;do&nbsp;work&nbsp;with&nbsp;my&nbsp;heart.&nbsp;I&nbsp;work&nbsp;well&nbsp;in&nbsp;a&nbsp;team&nbsp;environment&nbsp;or&nbsp;by&nbsp;myself&nbsp;and&nbsp;am&nbsp;a&nbsp;good&nbsp;listener.<br />
alice84 发表于 2008-9-6 20:51 | 显示全部楼层

不怎么样,感觉是从书上摘的

  
123654789 发表于 2008-9-6 21:11 | 显示全部楼层

很多错漏

My&nbsp;duties&nbsp;are&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Designed&nbsp;several&nbsp;products&nbsp;&nbsp;时态不一致&nbsp;&nbsp;<br />&nbsp;<br />Computer&nbsp;Abilities&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;无须复数<br /><br />can&nbsp;sit&nbsp;quietly&nbsp;to&nbsp;do&nbsp;work&nbsp;with&nbsp;my&nbsp;heart&nbsp;我能坐硬板凳用心做事<br /><br />Spoken&nbsp;English&nbsp;is&nbsp;no&nbsp;very&nbsp;good&nbsp;&nbsp;把no该为not<br />
 楼主| mick_liang 发表于 2008-9-6 23:02 | 显示全部楼层

第一次写英文简历

第一次写英文简历,一些东西都不知道.英语说写能力也不怎么样.写出来献丑了.各位大哥有什么建议吗?
liuyj226 发表于 2008-9-9 11:47 | 显示全部楼层

Computer Abilities 无须复数

为什么不需要用复数啊?English&nbsp;Skills就是复数
pigjiang 发表于 2008-9-9 19:24 | 显示全部楼层

补充3楼

hebei&nbsp;university&nbsp;后面应该有个of,国内的XX科技大学都这么取的。<br />看来现在的CET-6难度降低了。
haiyourong 发表于 2008-10-23 21:18 | 显示全部楼层

网上模板改改就行了

  
myic200610 发表于 2008-11-12 23:50 | 显示全部楼层

RE

I&nbsp;can&nbsp;understand&nbsp;it.
hs1126 发表于 2008-11-13 17:56 | 显示全部楼层

回复

Spoken&nbsp;English&nbsp;is&nbsp;no&nbsp;very&nbsp;good&nbsp;&nbsp;这个都错了&nbsp;<br />你的英语还有待提高啊&nbsp;<br />加油&nbsp;~~~
xhtxzxw 发表于 2008-11-27 03:45 | 显示全部楼层

嘿嘿

工作经历部分,是自己写的;<br />最后的其他部分,也是自己写的;<br /><br />其他,可以写得随意一点(当然也要符合语法和习惯用法)<br /><br />工作经历,应该/必须写得很严谨,最好是1234的罗列出来(当然语法/习惯用法也是不能有问题的,甚至要求比那个&quot;其他&quot;部分更严格一些,现在好象句子都不完整啊!!!!!)<br />PCB你designing就可以了,不需要再画人添尾的去drawing,你又不是画家.
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