两个句子，就两个句子有语法毛病，而且是中学里就有的基本语法哦。
The HR manager in Shanghai had interviewed me by telephone last time.
有具体时间的情况下（Last time 算，明确了上次，算具体时间），不用完成时态用一般过去时态。。
The HR manager in Shanghai interviewed me by the telephone last time.（不要掉了the）
Please give me some advise what should I do in the next step.
疑问句做句子成分不要倒装。should 应该在 I 后面。（肯定中学英语语法里有）
Please give me some advise what I should do in the next step.
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Ref: Application Status Inquiring
Dear Weiky:
I applied the position as xxxx in your company, the HR manager in Shanghai interviewed me by the telephone last time, but I have not heared from you since then. Could you please tell me my application status or what I should do? your kind response is much appreciated!
Best regards,
yyyyy
( XXX 写上你申请的职位； 例如： computer engineer. )
关于：工作申请情况询问。（这个可以加快信件到合适人手中，比如当Weiky有几个手下帮她处理公文，也使读信者好处理重要不重要信件。是常见的套式）
我申请了你们公司的（计算机工程师）职位，上次人事经理面试了我，但是再没有得到你们的消息。您能好心告诉我我的申请情况或着我该如何做吗？感谢您好心的回复。
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